Antigone Cadmus

I have read several books with multiple first person points of view. Books such as Impulse by Ellen Hopkins- there are three main characters who all write in first person. ...

Yay! A Tolkien lover! *hands cookie*

Primary school may seem "useless", but it's teaching kids how to interact with others and I think it is very important to development.

Alright, so this idea has been in my head for several years. I wrote it an realized it has some similarities the His Dark Materials and Artemis Fowl. Tell me ...

ZOMG LIEK HOW CAN YOU MAKE FUN OF TWILIGHT??? No, no really, thank you! Thank God for you other Stephanie Meyer haters out there! I swear I am the only ...

Part three! Onto the review... the Nazi’s The Nazis aren't possessing anything here. Change to Nazis. Baby Evette Is not a baby anymore. Isn't she about five? I couldn’t find ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! This was...entertaining. I don't feel like nit-picking today, so I'll just do some hints: 1.) This should be posted in scripts. Is it supposed to be ...

Not as cliche as yours, Amniel-kun. Show me the cliche.

It's time to talk about cliches lol. Amniel-not a good idea to get on my bad side when I'm the only one who critiques your work. Snarky male character. Meets ...

--- removed because I'm a far better writer now then this 12 year old junk

Lukas-kun! Time to review! One off the groups member's turned around. You need an apostrophe in groups. Should be "group's" "The zombies.." Comma instead of two periods. "Oh yeah.. no" ...

Done, Vyper! Nope, they are completely free! Sorry, your review I wrote kind of sucks. There was nothing to nit-pick. I apologize.

As promised! trying not to glance down at the scene below. You never explain what the "scene below" is. Some are small, some are slightly larger than normal. Replace the ...

Hey, Amniel! Was this supposed ti be a Fanfic? Of what? Anyway... travellers One l. You do this many times, every single time you write traveler. I'll only correct it ...

Hey, Daydream! I really liked your prologue. *jumps for joy* Chapter 1! Onto the review: “’Oo want’a keep ‘our job, eh? Your characters little cockney accents are really beginning to ...